Dangerous Ways to Get to School
Task: To use descriptive language and rich vocabulary to describe how children get to school.
Success:
Vocabulary is precise and a range of words are used.
Writing is paragraphed.
How do you go to school ,you probably go to school by car ,bike or bus
But did you know how some people get to school? You think your way is hard ,listen to this and you might find your way easy.
Hi my name is Josh and every day I walk up a treacherous frightening cliff trail over 2000m high ,which is very unstable ,slippery and a rocky death drop. I have to walk up and down the trail every day for a year to get a good education.
So would you like to walk for agers past dangerous obstacles on high cliffs would you
By Jack hopkins
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