In Stacy's pocket

12 things in Mrs S’s / Mr K’s pocket / Sponge Bob Square Pants - Choose an interesting character, who you could use for this piece of writing.

Writing task: 

To think of 12 things that are either in Mr S’s or Mr K’s pocket or  Sponge Bob Square Pants

Focus: Punctuation and Sentences. 

Punctuation Success:

OK: All sentences have capital letters and full stops. Example: In SpongeBob’s pockets there was a key. 

There was also rubber. 

Good: There are a range of other punctuation eg commas, question marks etc    Example In SpongeBob’s pocket there was a telescope. Why? This is so he could see where he was going. 

Excellent: I can use semicolons in a list. See example below

Example - 12 things in Sponge Bob Square Pants Pocket.

In SpongeBob’s pocket you would find: Six crusty old crabby patties, in case he gets lost under the sea; an invite to Patrick Star’s 28th birthday party in case he forgets the address; …

In Stacy's pocket: You will find her morning star ,made out of  sewing string and ice block sticks; You will also find some stickers that she stole from kindergarten; Some eye bursting pepper spray for Mega fat ceo baby; One of jimbo’s stinky pacifiers;A smelly toto from a ballerina recital; A barbie head  she ripped off; A stapler off boss baby; a sticky button that she ripped off reney her teacher;The modest baby in the world certificate: A asma inhaler for when she gets stressed; A sharp pin;a bottle cap for something; a pencil for doodling.

I think I did well at my pocket writing. I managed to be able to write 12 reasons, that's why I think I did well.

By Jack Hopkins